高考作文强化训练
㈠ 请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
去年的暑假你到一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店做保洁工作。每天工作七个小时，为期三周。这项工作辛苦且枯燥，并使你感到非常疲劳，几乎使你半途放弃。每天你都要起早贪黑地工作。在新学期开始之前，你终于坚持完成了这项工作，并且由此认识了劳动的意义。你认为这是一次成功的体验。
注意：字数100左右。
㈡ 随着网络的发展，目前很多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡。请根据以下提示，阐述电子贺卡的优越性。
①可播放动画和声音。
②传递速度快。
③形式多样。
④有利于环境保护。
注意：文章包括以上要点，可适当发挥。不要逐条翻译。 词数：100左右。
生词：电子贺卡：electronic card 动画：animations
㈢ 假设你叫刘华，在一堂《经济常识》课上，你班同学组织了一场讨论。讨论的主题是：广告的利弊。请你根据下表提供的信息，给《中国日报》写一封信，介绍你班同学讨论的结果。
广告之利 2．为顾客节约购物时间。 3．为厂家或服务提供商找到市场。
注意：
1 词数：100左右
2 参考词汇：消费者----consumer 误导的----misleading
㈣ 假设有外宾去参观你们学校的图书馆。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇介绍资料。
1 藏书共10万册 2 汉语类藏书7万册 广告之弊 2．有的广告带欺诈性，误导消费者。 3．巨额广告开支转嫁到了消费者身上。 1．提供商品、服务、文化、就业等信息。 1．浪费人民的时间，如电视广告。 藏书情况 3 外语类藏书3万册，其中英语书籍占外语类的90﹪ 1 自然科学类书籍约占30﹪ 图书类别 工作人员 阅览室情况 2 社会科学类书籍约占60﹪ 3 其他书籍约占10﹪ 共有5人 1 设教师阅览室和学生阅览室 2 订有国内外报刊共100余种，外文报刊中大多为英语版 3 每日开放
注意：
1 以“This is our library”为首句
2 先参观图书馆借书处，再参观阅览室，按参观路线介绍
3 词数：100左右
㈤ 现在很多中学生出国留学。据环球时报报道，澳大利亚驻华使馆2002年签发的留学签证有50﹪给了高中生。假设你是名叫李华的学生，请给某报编辑写一封信，根据以下所给要求，明确表示赞成还是反对中学生出国留学（只能选一种观点）。字数120左右。 赞成：
1 与中国教育相比，国外教育有诸多优点，如：
2 在国外接受教育，可以培养学生多方面的能力，如：
反对：
1 与中国教育相比，国外教育可能存在诸多问题，如：
2 过早留学，可能给学生在精神上、学习上及经济上造成诸多负面影响。如：
注：除以上内容，你还可以陈述赞成或反对的其他理由。
㈥ 以“The Importance of Water”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，要点如下： 1.没有水便没有生命。
2.随着现代工业的迅速发展，越来越需要更多的水。现在许多地方的水已经变得越来越缺乏。
3.许多河流和湖泊开始被工厂排出的污水所污染。
4.为了保护水资源，防止水污染，我们必须采取措施，与各种污染作斗争。
㈦ 当今女性减肥已成为一种时尚。减肥的方法层出不穷，有的采用节食减肥，有的进行运动减肥，有的利用药物减肥，有的甚至手术减肥。市场上一时出现了不少的减肥药，减肥茶，减肥内衣。然而，各种减肥的方法效果不一，有的甚至带来副作用，请你谈谈减肥这一现象和
你认为好的减肥方法，并陈述理由。
㈧ 请根据中文提示，用英语向来访的贵宾介绍你校新建的网络学校。 1．使教和学更方便，更有趣，能在课堂上获取更多的信息，学到更多知识。
2．向师生开放，可向世界各地发送电子邮件，获取信息，等等。
3．只要家中有电脑，任何人都可以学习本校课程。
4．有助于改善学校的管理，满足现代教育的需要。
5．作为重点学校，对于其他的新建中学起示范和帮助作用。
㈨ 假设你是某百货商场外事办的工作人员，请根据下面表格提供的情况，用应用文介绍该商场的经营活动情况。
有关事项 营业时间 内容 上午8：00---晚上11：00 一楼：日用必需品、食物 经营的主要商品 二楼：服装 三楼：电器 四楼：办公用品 电话购物 特别服务项目 导购服务 顾客至上
注意：
1．要写成一篇连贯的短文。
2．词数：100---120左右。
3．生词：必需品：necessary
电器：electrical appliance 批评：criticism
㈩ 2月1日，你去祖母家和亲友一起过春节。傍晚，你的表弟David要去放鞭炮，正巧遇到同学Lily。请把图中的事写成日记。
联系电话：33073369 请各层导购小姐帮助 欢迎提意见和建议 商品齐全 货真价实 说明
答案详解： ㈠
第一步，分析：
根据题目的汉语提示，可知这是一篇描述去年暑假期间所做的一份工作的情况。 ①题目提示中反复提到“你…”，所以本文应以第一人称的口吻去写。
②本文既然是描述在去年暑假期间的事情，所以应以一般过去时态为主。当谈到对这项工作的认识时应用现在时态。
第二步， 列出短文要点（即：得分点）： ①2005年暑假到肯德基快餐店。
②工作的内容：担任三周保洁工作，每天工作七个小时。
③当时对这份工作的感觉：枯燥、令人疲倦（起早贪黑）几乎导致半途而废。
④坚持干完了工作。
⑤认识到了劳动的价值。
第三步，分段落：
Para1:描述在暑假期间所做的工作内容。
Para2:表达“我”对这份工作的最初看法。
Para3:举例说明“我”做这份工作有多么辛苦。
Para4:表达“我”对劳动的新的认识。
第四步，主要短语和句型： 快餐店：fast food restaurant
保洁工：cleaner
担任…：work as…
令人疲劳：make sb. tired
半途而废：stop sth. half way
坚持：stick to sth.
动身去工作：start off for work
一次…的经历：a(an)…experience
参考答案：
During the last summer holiday, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of touring. So I got a job at KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day for three weeks.
The job was hard and boring, which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way. After all, I stuck to it with determination.
Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. I finally finished the job before the new school term began.
Now, I understand what labor means. I think it is really a successful experience. ㈡
审题：本文以说明为主，客观地介绍电子贺卡的优越性。 时态：一般现在时态为主。 段落：
Para1:引入电子贺卡（亲戚、朋友、网络）
Para2:贺卡的优越性：与传统的贺卡相比：
①动画，声音
②传递速度快
③形式多样
④有利于环保
Para3:归纳，发表看法（简短） 丰富多彩的句子表达方式：
①文章的开头方式：
方式一：
With the development of the Internet, more and more people prefer to send electronic cards to their relatives and friends.
方式二：
With the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones at festival.
方法三：
With the development of the Internet, we have more and more ways to communicate with each other.
方法四：
In the past, we used to send paper cards to our relatives and friends. But now, with the development of the Internet, most of people like to send electronic cards.
方法五：
Electronic cards are poplar with people for their advantages, compared with paper cards.
②电子贺卡和传统贺卡的比较： 方法一：
Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations.
方法二：
Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards have many advantages. First, …. Second, … Last, …
方法三：
Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards have many advantages. Firstly,… Secondly, …Finally,…
方法四：
Electronic cards have varieties of patterns for you to choose from. If possible, you may design it yourself.
方法五：
Electronic cards can benefit our environment protection.
方法六：
In contrast to paper cards, the great advantages of electronic cards is that they won’t cause any pollution, for they need no trees.
③总结归纳：
方法一：
In a word, thanks to so many advantages, electronic cards are becoming more and more popular.
方法二：
In brief, electronic cards will take the place of paper cards sooner or later.
方法三：
In short, electronic cards will take the place of paper cards sooner or later.
方法四：
In conclusion, electronic cards will take the place of paper cards sooner or later.
方法五：
As has been stated, electronic cards will take the place of paper cards sooner or later.
方法六：
In my opinion, we should use electronic cards.
方法七：
In a word, it's more enjoyable and fashionable to send electronic cards.
参考答案：
With the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones at New Year's time.
Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations. Besides, it’s faster to send an electronic card. There are many web sites on line where there are many kinds of nice cards for you to choose from. If you like none of them, you can design cards of unique style of your own. Above all, if more and more people use electronic cards, less paper will be used for making paper cards, which contributes to the environment protection.
In my opinion, electronic cards will take the place of paper cards sooner or later. ㈢
分析：根据汉语提示，可知题目要求以刘华的身份写一封信，应注意用正确的书信格式： Dear…,
--------------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------- Yours truly, Liu Hua
要点如下：
1．在《经济常识课上》讨论广告的利弊。
2．广告提供商品、服务、文化、就业等信息。
3．为厂家或服务提供商找到市场。
4．广告浪费人们的时间，如电视广告。
5．有的广告带欺诈性，误导消费者。
6．巨额广告开支转嫁到了消费者身上。
分段落：
Para1:引入主题：讨论会，广告的利弊问题。（一般过去时态）
Para2:广告的利（现在时态）
Para3:广告的弊（现在时态）
参考答案：
Dear Editor of China Daily,
Recently our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.
Daily life needs advertisements because they can offer information on goods, services, culture, employment and so on. With advertisements, customers can save a lot of time in shopping. Advertisements also help factories or service providers find their market. In a word, advertisements have many advantages.
However, we also find advertisements a waste of time when we don’t need them, for example, when watching TV programs. To make things worse, some advertisements are misleading and cheating. Furthermore, huge advertising expenses are shared by customers, which seems to be unfair.
Yours truly,
Liu Hua ㈣
分析：本文是以说明为主的介绍图书馆的情况的文章，应以现在时态为主。
列要点：
1．藏书10册，其中汉语类藏书7万册，外语类藏书3万册（英语类站外语类的90﹪）
2．自然科学类书籍约占30﹪，社会科学类书籍约占60﹪，其他书籍约占10﹪
3．共有5名工作人员。
4．阅览室分教师阅览室和学生阅览室。
5．阅览室订有国内外报刊共100余种，外文报刊中大多为英语版。
6．阅览室每日开放。
分段落：
Para1:介绍图书馆的藏书情况
Para2:介绍阅览室情况
Para3:介绍图书馆工作人员情况
参考答案：
Our Library
This is our library. This is where books are borrowed and returned. It has a collection of 100,000 books, including 70,000 in Chinese and 30,000 in foreign languages, of which about 90 percent are in English. Of all the books, about 30 percent are on natural science, about 60 percent on social science and about 10 percent on other subjects.
Here are the reading-rooms: one for the teachers and the other for the students. More than 100 kinds of newspapers and magazines from home and abroad are in the library. The foreign newspapers and magazines are mostly in English. The reading-rooms open every day. They are often crowded.
There are five librarians working in the library. They work hard to serve the readers whole-heartedly, and keep the library well managed. ㈤ 分析：
应采用书信的格式，并且要明确表达态度（赞成还是反对）。阐述赞成出国留学的理由或反对出国留学的理由。
参考答案： 赞成： Dear editor,
I think it is good to send teenagers abroad for further study.
It has a good education sense, pays special attention to the training of students’ abilities and creates relaxing self-study circumstances for them.
In the schools, we don’t have to bear a heavy learning load as we do in China, and therefore we can learn more and better.
In foreign countries, we have more chances to learn about foreign culture, customs and habits, which can broaden our mind.
Though we have to look after ourselves abroad and maybe life is hard for us, it will help us train our ability to live independently and deal with problems.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
反对： Dear editor,
I don’t think it is good to send teenagers abroad to study.
Compared with China’s education, foreign education has many problems.
Some foreign schools are not as good as those of our country in teaching quality. In those schools, students can’t learn more, and therefore waste a lot of money, which is a heavy burden to their families.
Teenagers are too young to take care of themselves either in their studies or in their daily life, which in turn will bring a lot of trouble to them.
As they often don’t have the ability to tell right from wrong, and lack necessary help guidance, some lose their interest in studies and even learn something bad.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua ㈥
分析：本文要求阐述水的重要性，现在面临的水资源缺乏问题、水被工业污染的问题。全文应以现在时态为主。
分段落：
Para1:开门见山，引入主题。
Para2:水资源缺乏和污染问题。
Para3:采取措施解决问题。
参考答案：
The Importance of Water
As we know, plants and animals need water. So do people’s life and production. Life couldn’t go on without water.
With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed. However, water is becoming scarce in many places. What’s more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning to be polluted by the waste water from factories. Fish can’t live in them any longer. At the same time, the waste water does great harm to people’s health.
In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent them from being polluted, we must take measures to stop it and fight a battle with all kinds of pollution. ㈦
分析：本文要求说明现在流行的减肥问题，这是一种社会现象，所以应采用现在时态。 列要点：
⒈ 减肥是一种时尚。
⒉ 减肥的各种方法：运动、药物、茶、器械、内衣、手术
⒊ 减肥的效果及副作用
⒋ 对这一现象的看法
⒌ 哪一种是较好的减肥方法及理由
分段落：
Para1:减肥现象及各种方法
Para2:对减肥的看法及主张
参考答案：
Nowadays weight-losing has become popular among young and middle-aged women. In order to make themselves pretty-looking, they try many different ways of losing weight. Some go on a diet, some take exercise, some eat medicine, others even turn to operation for help. As a result, a lot of products are born with it . Provided at markets are special medicine, tea and equipment, which are used in different ways and work differently, but some have side effects.
In my opinion, it’s understandable that women seek beauty, but they should do it in a proper way. Taking exercise is the way that I most favor, as the other methods are likely to do harm to people’s health more or less. ㈧
分析：这是一篇向贵宾介绍网络学校的发言稿，所以一定要注意文章的开头用称呼语和客气的语言，结尾也应有客套的语言。全文应采用现在时态。 词汇、短语参考：
满足…的要求：meet the needs of…
给…树立了好榜样：set a good example to …
充分利用：make good use of
新建的：newly-built
网校：net-school
分段落： Para1:引入
Para2:介绍新建的网校情况
Para3:结束语
参考答案：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school. Now I would like to introduce our net-school.
Our net-school is very helpful in many ways. First, it makes both teaching and learning easier and more interesting. Students can get more knowledge in class. Whoever has a computer can have the lesson we give at home. Second, we can make good use of the Internet, sending e-mails, searching for any information we need, etc. Third, the net also helps improve our school management and meet the needs of modern education. Fourths, as a key school in our city, it sets a good example to the newly-built schools and may be of some help to them.
That’s all. Thank you. ㈨
分析：这是一篇介绍商场经营情况的应用文。全文应以现在时态为主。行文要流畅，所写句子尽量采用对称、平行结构，内容要全面，应把表格中所提到的项目全部写入文章中去。另外，还要注意写作的格式，文章开头应有客套话。
参考答案：
You are welcome to give us advice and criticism.
Our shop opens from 8:00 to 11:00. We sell all kinds of products, which are of high quality and worth their prices. Daily necessaries and foods are on the first floor, clothing on the second floor, electrical appliances on the third floor and things for office use on the fourth floor. We have such special services as telephone-shopping and shopping guide. If you are busy, you may ring us and buy what you want. Our telephone number is 3873369. You may ask the shopping guide ladies on each floor for help if you have any problems about shopping. We treat our customers as God and try our best to serve you all. ㈩
分析：本文要求写成一篇日记，所以一定要注意采用日记的格式来写：左上角写当天的日期，右上角写当天的天气情况，星期可写在日期的前面或后面。全文时态应采用过去时态。 参考词汇和短语： 烟火：fireworks
春节：the Spring Festival
燃放：set off…
对…造成损害：do harm to…
碰巧；happen to do
要点：
1．在祖母家过春节。
2．David想放烟火。
3．碰见了同学Lily。
4．Lily向他展示了关于燃放烟火的危害（空气污染、炸伤、火灾）的宣传材料。
5．David听从了Lily的劝告，停止燃放烟火。
参考答案： Feb.1st, Monday
Windy
I was spending my holiday in my grandmother’s home. My cousin David got some fireworks and was going to set them off. This happened to be seen by his classmate, Lily. She told him not to do so. But David thought it was the Spring Festival and he could enjoy himself for a while. So
Lily showed him some picture posters and explained that setting off fireworks might cause pollution and big fires. The worse to happen was that it would do serious harm to people’s eyes. Having heard this, David agreed with Lily. He threw his fireworks away.
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