高考英语大二轮复习专题六写作规范练一

(限时：35分钟)

写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

[2019·长春市质量监测]My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she cheered me up when I am down. I remember the day which I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road trembled under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while and there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, her heart melted. I gentle held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm bathe and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care for her every day.

答案与解析：

My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she cheered me up when I am

①cheers

down. I remember the day which I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold.

②when

I found a little dirty dog by the road trembled under the bush. I stopped to wait

③trembling

for quite a while and there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes,

④but

her heart melted. I gentle held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm bathe

⑤my

⑥gently

⑦bath

and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is ∧ pleasant surprise for

⑨a

me and my family and I take good care for her every day.

⑩of

①cheered改为cheers 考查时态。此处叙述作者当前的情况，因此这里谓语动词应该

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用一般现在时。

②which改为when 考查关系词。分析句子结构可知，此处引导定语从句修饰名词the day并在从句中作时间状语，故应该用when引导该从句。

③trembled改为trembling 考查非谓语动词。句中动词tremble与谓语动词之间没有连词，应用其非谓语动词形式，且该动词与其逻辑主语a little dirty dog为主谓关系，故用其现在分词形式。

④and改为but 考查连词。“我”停下来等了好大一会儿，但是没有她主人的影子。根据句意可知，这里应该用并列连词but表示转折含义。

⑤her改为my 考查代词。根据语境可知，此处表示“我”看到这幕情景时的心情，应该用my而不是her。

⑥gentle改为gently 考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故用gently。

⑦bathe改为bath 考查名词。根据该句中的“a warm”可知，这里应该用名词bath。 ⑧删除was 考查语态。recover表示“痊愈，康复”，是不及物动词，没有被动语态，因此删除was。

⑨pleasant前加a 考查冠词。根据语境可知，pleasant在这里用作可数名词，表示“令某人愉快的事物”，且pleasant的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a。

⑩for改为of 考查固定搭配。take care of“照顾”为固定搭配。 第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

[2019·衡水中学高三七调考试]假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter的哥哥要到你所在的城市工作，计划到你所在的小区居住，并向你询问该小区的情况。请根据以下提示给他回封邮件。要点如下：

1．表示欢迎；

2．你所在的小区适宜居住的理由(至少三条)。 注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter， I

am

so

pleased

to

receive

your

letter.

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely，

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Li Hua 参考范文：

Dear Peter，

I am so pleased to receive your letter. I am even happier to hear that your brother

will move to our neighborhood and stay here.

I think that's his smartest choice. Firstly, it is a wonderful, peaceful and clean area with a lot of greenery and open spaces to play in. Secondly, people in my neighborhood are friendly and easy­going. Thirdly, the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your brother will find the house to his taste. Last but not least, it is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city.

He will definitely be happy here.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

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