【山东省聊城市2019届高三二模】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。恰好你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer Camp),请你给他发一封电子邮件,邀请他参加该活动。内容包括:1.时间和地点;
2.活动内容:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等;3.报名方式和截止日期。注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Tom,Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I have good news for you. Chinese Summer Camp for international students will be held in our school this summer vacation. Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to join in it.
The camp will last 11 days, from July18 to July 28 in Xian. It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying daily Chinese to attending some lectures on Chinese history and culture. The Camp also provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums, which will definitely give you n broader picture of the country.Please sign up before July 2nd on our school website. Look forward to your early reply.
YoursLi Hua
【解析】【分析】
本文是一篇应用文,要求考生把自己当成李华,你的美国朋友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。恰好你校今
年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer Camp),请你给他发一封电子邮件,邀请他参加该活动。
【详解】第1步:审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件,要求考生给美国朋友Tom写一封邮件,邀请他参加今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动。全文以一般现在时为主。
第2步:组织要点。(1)时间和地点;(2)活动内容:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等; 3)报名方式和截止日期。
第3步:根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句,关键词为Chinese Summer Camp 、studying daily Chinese、o attending some lectures on Chinese history and culture、visit some famous museums、sign up等。写作时注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点。使用了较多的高级词汇和短语结构,如are obsessed with、wide variety of、ranging from等。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,如定语从句The Camp also provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums and historical re is, which will definitely give you n broader picture of the country.;非谓语的使用It covers& wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying daily Chinese to attending some lectures on Chinese history and culture. 考生可以模仿提高自己的写作水平。
【四川省凉山州2019届高三第三次诊断性检测】假设你是张华,你的英国笔友Michael即将到中国来学习,并在中国过中秋节。他发来电子邮件询问有关中秋节的习俗。请你用英语写一封100词左右的回信,介绍一下有关情况。内容要点:
1. 中秋节通常在九月或十月,我们吃各种月饼;2. 人们喜欢在户外边吃月饼边赏月;
3. 中秋节是家人团聚的日子,回顾过去,展望未来。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Michael,
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Yours,Zhang Hua
【答案】Dear Michael,
Firstly I must say you’re welcomed by our whole family.
Now I’ll introduce our traditional festival — Mid-Autumn Festival to you, which falls in September or October. On that day we usually have a big dinner and the typical food—moon cakes together. There are many kinds of moon cakes, such as meat, nuts or something else.
What impresses us most is that all the family members like to stay outside in the evening to enjoy the moon as they are eating moon cakes. During this time, we may look back on the past and look forward to the future.
Waiting for your arrival. And I’m sure you will like our colorful Mid-Autumn Festival.
Yours,Zhang Hua
【解析】【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信;假设你是张华,你的英国笔友Michael即将到中国来学习,并在中国过中秋节。他发来电子邮件询问有关中秋节的习俗。请你用英语写一封100词左右的回信,介绍一下有关情况。内容要点:1. 中秋节通常在九月或十月,我们吃各种月饼;2. 人们喜欢在户外边吃月饼边赏月;3. 中秋节是家人团聚的日子,回顾过去,展望未来。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:Mid-Autumn Festival(中秋节),typical food(特色食物),moon cakes(月饼),impress(使印象深刻);enjoy the moon(赏月)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Now I’ll introduce our traditional festival — Mid-Autumn Festival to you, which falls in September or October.运
用了定语从句;What impresses us most is that all the family members like to stay outside in the evening to enjoy the moon as they are eating moon cakes.运用了主语从句与时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。【浙江省温州市2019届高三普通高中5月份高考适应性测试】 写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节:应用文写作(满分15分)
66.假定你是李华,校学生会主席。加拿大某高中部分学生将于下周来你校交流学习,请你代表学校给他们的领队Alan发邮件明确接机事宜,内容包括:1.核实到达时间;2.明确接机位置;3.告知辨认方式。注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Alan,
I'm Li Hua,president of the school Students' Union.On behalf of our school,I'm honored to meet your team at the airport.
Are you arriving at 5: 15 pm next Monday?If so,I'll be waiting for you at the exit of the International Arrival Hall. To make myself easily picked out, I'm going to hold a signboard with your name on it. And I'm sure you won't miss it.
Wish you a pleasant journey!
Yours,Li hua
【解析】【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给即将来你校交流学习的加拿大某高中学生的领队发一封邮件。应该明确三点内容:1.核实到达时间; 2.明确接机位置; 3.告知辨认方式。
【详解】所给提示内容比较明确,所以该文难度一般,比较好写。考生可以根据时提示列出主要内容,然后对主要内容进行句式,遣词造句等方面的扩充拓展。此外,还可以适当的在各要点之间添加连接词。文章应该以将来时态为主。
【点睛】所给范文条理明确,要点齐全。长短句灵活使用,自然到位。语言简洁明了。正确应用了一些高级句式和词汇,例如:on behalf of;be honored to do;非谓语动词(to make myself easily picked out);with的复合结构(with your name on it),为文章增色不少。
第二节:概要写作(满分25分)
67.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
High school exit tests are tests that students must pass to graduate from high school. In the last few years. however, a number of states in America have dropped them. Although some states still use them for diplomas, the number is down from a high of 27 states during the testing craze promoted by No Child Left Behind (NCLB).
The appearance of this phenomenon is small wonder. Researches clearly show that exit tests have little positive effects on students. A 2014 report found exit testing was associated with lower graduation rates, negatively affected labor market outcomes, and, most alarmingly, produced a 12.5 percent increase in incarceration( 监禁)rates. Exit exams, the study concluded, had tended to add little value for most students.
Exit testing relies on the following assumptions. One is that standardized testing can serve as a kind of “quality control”for high school graduates, guaranteeing that graduates are college ready.The other is that they have predicting value for future success in academic situations.
But there is little evidence. The tests don't exactly measure what they pretend to measure. For example, qualities such as intelligence, academic ability, college readiness are not determined.Those that should be developed in all young people, like responsibility, critical thinking,and empathy (移植),are not measured,either.Even supporters of exit tests have acknowledged that they don't offer reliable data.
Thus, more and more people are suggesting that exit test scores ought to be just one component of the high school diploma. Schools should consider many other records including credits earned, courses taken,activities, service, projects and other elements of academic accomplishment so that students can be evaluated flexibly. In other words, exit test scores should never be the only criterion for high school diplomas.
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【答案】High school exit tests have been cancelled in some states in America in recent years. This is not surprising because studies show they do little good to students. Instead of ensuring college readiness and academic success, they actually don't measure what should be measured. Therefore, exit test scores should only be one part of the standards of high school diplomas.【解析】【分析】
这是一篇说明文。文章介绍了在美国,越来越多的州放弃高中学业测试。文章分析了导致这种现象出现的原因以及解决办法。
【详解】整篇文章脉络比较清晰:第一段提出一个现象:在美国,越多的州放弃高中结业测试。第二和第三段分析了产生这种现象的原因:高中结业测试对学生没有起到什么积极的作用。它的测试结果没有什么意义。第三段提出结论:学校应该考虑用其他记录来评判学生,结业测试不能成为唯一的标准。考生将每段的主要内容概括在一起,即可得到整篇文章的内容概要。
【点睛】所给范文清楚明确地概括出了文章的主要内容。语言简练,用词准确。适当运用了一些较好的词汇和句式。例如:cancel;do good to;ensure;academic success;宾语从句(what should be measured)等。
【广东省六校2019届高三第四次联考】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Justin 得知你想提高英文写作能力,给你寄来一本《英文 写作要素》(The Elements Of Style)。请你回一封信。内容包括:1. 感谢对方;2. 会认真研读;3. 你的回礼。 注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Justin,
How is everything going with you?
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Best wishes.
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Justin,
How is everything going with you? I’m so excited to have received the book The Elements Of Style you sent to me, which is the very book that I had been looking forward to. Thanks sincerely for your considerate thought.
As you know, I am working at improving my English writing ability recently, and the book will be very useful, and will be a great help. Actually, I have made a plan to study and read the book intensively and carefully. In this way, I’m fully convinced that I can achieve my goal.
In return for your favor, I mail a book named The History Of China to you, since you are eager to know something about Chinese culture. Hopefully, you will like it.
Best wishes.Yours
,Li Hua【解析】【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信;假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Justin 得知你想提高英文写作能力,给你寄来一本《英文 写作要素》(The Elements Of Style)。请你回一封信。内容包括:1. 感谢对方;2. 会认真研读;3. 你的回礼。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:look forward to(期待),considerate(体贴的),be a great help(非常有帮助),In return for(作为……的报答)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m so excited to have received the book The Elements Of Style you sent to me, which is the very book that I had been looking forward to.运用了定语从句;I mail a book named The History Of China to you, since you are eager to know something about Chinese culture.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
【河南省八市重点高中联盟“领军考试”2019届高三第三次测评】假定你是李华,作为交换生在一所英国学校交流学习。现在你即将回国,要作为学生代表在欢送会上发言,请按下列要点写一篇发言稿:1.表示感谢; 2.学习的收获和感受; 3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear teachers and friends,
I feel greatly honored to give a speech here on behalf of all the exchange students
.Living and studying here makes us very fulfilled. During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon. Apart from that, our abilities including listening, speaking and writing English have also got greatly improved. And it is all the English teachers and classmates here that we should owe many thanks to. Without their help, we couldn’t have achieved so much.
True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with each other even after we go back home. And I also sincerely hope that some day you can come to China for a visit.
That’s all! Thank you!【解析】
首先审题,要求作为学生代表在欢送会上发言,写一篇发言稿。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容1.表示感谢; 2.学习的收获和感受; 3.表达祝愿。抓住了这亮点,我们就抓住了文章的核心内容,一定要注意发言稿的用语和格式。其次选用正确的人称和时态,考虑用一般现在时,第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子,使用正确的连词,连句成段。具体来说,写这篇文章时,要注意: 1、提示中的内容比较泛泛,需要适当补充; 2、为使文章层次清楚,可分三个自然段写:第一自然段说明自己很荣幸作为学生代表发言;第二自然段对自己的收获和感受进行总结;第三自然段表示友谊并不会随着自己回国而结束。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: on behalf of代表,Apart from除……之外。还使用了定语从句During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture, society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizon.和宾语从句And I also sincerely hope that some day you can come to China for a visit.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
【湖北省鄂东南省级示范高中教育教学改革联盟2019届第一次模拟】假定你是李华,你打算今年暑期邀请你的英国朋友 Joseph 到你的家乡参观游览。请你用英语给 他写一封邀请信,内容包括:1.住宿安排在你家;2.游览名胜,品尝小吃;3.感受当地风土人情。 注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Joseph,
How is everything going? I’m more than delighted to write you this letter, in which I’d like to sincerely invite you
to come to my hometown for a visit during the approaching summer holiday, when my college entrance examinations will be over.
It would be a great pleasure for me to keep you company. During your visit here, you can stay at my home. Additionally, I’ll show you around some places of interest. Of course, there is something nice you can't miss, that is, tasting some famous local snacks and experiencing the local history and culture as well as our customs. I’m fully convinced that you’ll surely like my hometown. I’d be honoured if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,Li Hua
【解析】【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封邀请信;假定你是李华,你打算今年暑期邀请你的英国朋友 Joseph 到你的家乡参观游览。请你用英语给 他写一封邀请信,内容包括:1.住宿安排在你家;2.游览名胜,品尝小吃;3.感受当地风土人情。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:more than delighted(非常高兴),approaching(即将到来的),college entrance examinations(高考),local snacks(当地小吃);be honoured(荣幸)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m more than delighted to write you this letter, in which I’d like to sincerely invite you to come to my hometown for a visit during the approaching summer holiday, when my college entrance examinations will be over.运用了非限定性定语从句和时间状语从句;I’m fully convinced that you’ll surely like my hometown.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
【江西省赣州市五校协作体2019届高三上学期期中】上周五下午,你校举办了一场以\"Being Grateful\"为主题的讲座.请根据下面的写作提示,用英语写一篇新闻稿.内容包括:1.时间、地点;
2.活动经过;3.你的感悟.注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
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【答案】Last Friday afternoon, a lecture whose theme is \"Being Grateful\" was held on the playground of our school.
It started at 4:00 pm and lasted two hours. All the students and teachers attended it. First, the headmaster introduced the guest speaker. Then the speaker gave us a lecture on why we should be grateful, during which the audience were so deeply moved that they applauded warmly from time to time. Finally, some students expressed their thanks to those whom they are grateful to in front of all the people present.
Such a lecture is really meaningful to all of us. Everyone of us should be grateful for what we have, so we can live a happy life.【解析】【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇新闻稿。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇新闻稿;上周五下午,你校举办了一场以\"Being Grateful\"为主题的讲座,请根据下面的写作提示,用英语写一篇新闻稿。内容包括:时间、地点;活动经过;你的感悟。人称应使用第一、三人称,时态应为一般过去时。
第2步:动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。
第3步:写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。注意使用
恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第4步:书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】高分句型一:Last Friday afternoon, a lecture whose theme is \"Being Grateful\" was held on the playground of our school.
译文:上周五下午,我们学校的操场上举行了主题为\"感恩\"的讲座. 分析:这句话使用whose引导定语从句.
高分句型二: Then the speaker gave us a lecture on why we should be grateful, during which the audience were so deeply moved that they applauded warmly from time to time.
译文:然后,演讲者给我们讲了一个为什么我们应该感激的演讲,在演讲过程中,观众们被深深地感动了,他们不时地热烈鼓掌.
分析:这句话使用why引导宾语从句,during which引导非限制性定语从句.
【东北三省四市2019届高三二模联考】校学生会计划举办“汉语桥”活动,你受学生会委托写一则通知,邀请你校美国留学生参加此活动。内容包括:1. 介绍活动的意义;
2. 邀请美国留学生参加动员会 the pep rally;3. 动员会的时间、地点。注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结语已为你写好。Notice
Dear overseas students from America
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The Students’ Union
【答案】Notice
Dear American overseas students,
Here comes the news that Chinese Bridge series activities will be held in our school. So all of participants are warmly welcome in the pep rally to get fully prepared for the follow-ups.
Themed at promoting Chinese culture around the world, Chinese Bridge acts as a platform to help narrow the gap of mutual understanding about China. Whoever is actively involved in it will develop a positive awareness of Chinese and its culture behind. Based on it, the pep rally is scheduled in our school auditorium from 14:00pm-15:00pm next Friday afternoon.
Please make sure you are available at that time and join us.
Student’s Union
【解析】【分析】
这是一篇应用文,要求写一则通知。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1. 介绍活动的意义;2. 邀请美国留学生参加动员会;3.动员会的时间、地点。第二,人称为第三人称。第三,时态以一般现在时为主,兼用一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,校学生会计划举办“汉语桥”活动,热烈欢迎所有的参与者参加动员会。第二段,介绍活动的意义;邀请美国留学生参加动员会;动员会的时间、地点。第三段,表达希望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: participants ,available,Chinese Bridge series activities,in our school,pep rally,get fully prepared for,promoting Chinese culture around the world,act as, narrow the gap of mutual understanding,be involved in sth, develop a positive awareness of ,in our school auditorium, from 14:00pm-15:00pm, next Friday afternoon。
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:过去分词作原因状语Themed at promoting Chinese culture around the world, Chinese Bridge acts as a platform to help narrow the gap of mutual understanding about China. whoever 引导的主语从句Whoever is actively involved in it will develop a positive awareness of Chinese and its culture behind。第五步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:过去分词作原因状语Themed at promoting Chinese culture around the world, Chinese Bridge acts as a platform to help narrow the gap of mutual understanding about China. whoever 引导的主语从句Whoever is actively involved in it
will develop a positive awareness of Chinese and its culture behind。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
【2019届呼和浩特高三英语二模】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统文化很感兴趣,计划下学期参加相关社团,他向你征询建议。请给他回邮件,推荐你校的京剧社团。邮件内容包括:1.介绍京剧社团(活动等);2.推荐的理由;
3.建议他做准备:简要了解京剧4.词数100左右。
参考词汇: 京剧 Peking Opera社团communityDear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jim,
Learning that you take great interest in learning traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to recommend the Peking Opera community to you for the following reasons.
First, it will offer you the basic knowledge of Peking Opera, such as its roots and costume, which I’m sure will be a good chance for you to appreciate traditional Chinese culture. Second, there are a wide variety of activities in this community for you to choose from. If possible, before the activities, you’d better make full preparations and have a brief understanding of the history of Peking Opera, so that you can know more about Peking Opera in a better way.
I would appreciate it if you could find my recommendation helpful and I sincerely hope you can benefit a lot from the community.
Yours,Li Hua
【解析】【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封邮件,向交换生Jim推荐学校的京剧社团。【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封邮件,向交换生Jim推荐学校的京剧社团。
第1步:根据提示可知英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统文化很感兴趣,计划下学期参加相关社团,他向你征询建议。你要回邮件,推荐你校的京剧社团。全文时态应为一般现在时。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),例如Peking Opera(京剧),community(社团),
recommend…to ….(向……推荐…..), offer you the basic knowledge of(提供…..的基础知识 ,make full preparations (做好准备),have a brief understanding of (简要了解…)。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范。本文使用了一些高级句型,比如非谓语的应用:Learning that you take great interest in learning traditional Chinese culture,I’d like to recommend the Peking Opera community to you for the following reasons. 定语从句的应用:First, it will offer you the basic knowledge of Peking Opera, such as its roots and costume, which I’m sure will be a good chance for you to appreciate traditional Chinese culture. 此外,作者还用了很多好的词组和好的表达方式,比如a wide variety of(各种各样的),benefit a lot from(从…..受益良多),take great interest in(对….感兴趣)。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,是一篇精彩的范文。考生可以多积累该范文中的词汇和表达方式,并通过仿写里面的句子来提升自己的写作水平。
【2019年淮北•宿州高三第二次模拟】假定你是红星中学的李华,你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:1. 介绍你校体育课程及活动;2. 推荐一项中国传统体育项目。注意:1.词数100左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one-year exchange program. Since you enjoy sports, I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.
First of all, for each class in our school, there are two to three periods of PE class every week. Basic courses, including playing basketball and running, are offered to students. Besides, the school sports meeting is held annually, which students can take part in according to their interests. What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu, a traditional sport in China. Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,Li Hua
【解析】【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国朋友Peter写一封邮件。
【详解】书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是红星中学的李华,你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:1. 介绍你校体育课程及活动;2. 推荐一项中国传统体育项目。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式。如Besides, the school sports meeting is held annually, which students can take part in according to their interests.使用了定语从句;Chinese calligraphy is the treasure of traditional Chinese culture, which has a history of 5,000 years.使用了定语从句;What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu, a traditional sport in China.使用了名词性从句;Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.使用了动名词作主语。另外文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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