高考英语上海续写作文

2021高考阅卷（作文） 范文1 Grasping the knowledge of those youngsters with naïve faces raising their hands high and expecting to inform their teachers of their novel answers from the picture, I could not help envying them, since our childhood was considerably different from theirs. Once we entered the primary school, we were instructed by teachers to keep both our hands on our backs and were forbidden to talk or move hands freely when they were speaking, which led to our uneasiness in class and deprived us of similar smiles on the picture. The divergence, I believe, should be attributed to the different educational system and concept between China and western countries. While they are encouraged to give full play to their creativity and curiosity, not willing to learn and instilled with a large amount of knowledge in order to obtain the admission letters from established universities and companies. Thus we are cultivated into identical “top-students” instead of creative individuals. Therefore, I eventually conclude that the next generation of our nation should be granted with more freedom to fully tap their potential and become all-round people. 范文2 As we all can see, the lovely students in the picture are so active that they all put their hands high, hoping to

express their own opinions. It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and everyone enjoys it. That's great, isn't it? The picture also reminds me of the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public. Just like me, during my class, our classmates just listened to class, and everyone was watching me! I even prayed that my name would never come to my teacher's mind. But as time goes by, I grow up, so as my mind. I realized that the situation show in the picture was far better. Children are all curious about everything, and knowledge will only be acquired by an inquiring mind. Those who dare not to speak out will never know anything new. The childhood without asking is not a real childhood. We should also keep the curiosity now, and forever. That will benefit you in the rest of your life. 范文3 From the picture, it can be easily seen that four primary students are raising their hands to answer the questions. So happy and excited are they that I see their eagerness for knowledge, which is powerful in all our life. Therefore,

unlimited as knowledge is, we should keep our enthusiasm to learn. When it comes to my first day in my primary school, I felt curious about everything. When my teacher asked questions, all of us raised our hands including some to answer them … wonderful moments in my life because although we were little kids, we carried our passion for learning new knowledge, which is beautiful and mysterious in our hearts. We were just like the children in the picture,

active and creative. It was at that time that knowledge appealed to me. Just as Bacon wrote in 1597, knowledge is power. I reckon that all of us should keep out enthusiasm to explore in the known and unknown worlds. Time-consuming and painstaking as it might be, nothing can stop a willing and curious heart. Only by living knowledge can we strive to learn. And only by gaining more knowledge can we become powerful, thus achieving our success and living out our values! There is no one but can resist the charm of knowledge, just like these students. Having an active heart and persevering in learning, the day we succeed will surely come！ 范文4 When I first saw the picture, I was deeply moved. In the picture, foreign pupils are having a lesson. Although they have just entered the elementary school, they are quite outgoing and energetic. They all raise their hands and want to take an active part in the lesson. The smile wearing on their faces indicates the confidence in their heart. I am moved by their enthusiastic attitude towards study, school life and even

future. However, it reminds me of my personal experience when I was at their age. Since I was a Chinese pupil, I as well as others was required to obey the strict rules of school. We sat quietly or even silently in the classroom and listened to the teacher's words. There were not many live discussions and the “teacher talking, students listening” was the most common pattern. I am shocked by such astonishing differences between Chinese education and foreign education. However, I gradually realize that the key factor leading to the difference lies in the culture background. Both of them have their advantages and shortcomings. Students like me who belong to Chinese classroom can learn to develop a sense of obeying rules which is essential for us to be good citizens. 。

1.2021Dear Haiqing, I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can't afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter. To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don't you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a

student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things? Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don't earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and

wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don't owe us expensive summer camps; they don't owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don't you think so? Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and

inexpensive. What's the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you'll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents. Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person's character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn't it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long? Keep in touch. Yours Huangping 2. 2021Dear Cathy, I am writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you, for I have just heard that you were depressed because you couldn't afford the best(famous) brands. I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his own image. And it is true that stylish clothes, shoes or something like those will make one more fashionable and eye-catching. However, everybody has his(her) own family background, and it is really extravagant for you to buy the famous brands. Besides, it will also add to the burden of your parents. What's more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things which can make you popular with others except fashion. A great amount of knowledge, noble character and a warm heart will surely win others' respect and admiration. Good qualities are the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear. Never judge a person by the appearance. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happy as you used to be. Yours,Jane。

Shanghai is my hometown. It is very morden.

Shanghai has changed a lot recently. It has become more and more beautiful.

You can see tall buildings and plants here and there I love Shanghai very much.

Shanghai

Shanghai is the biggest city in China. It is very beautiful, especially at night. Except for Beijing, it is also the central city of China. There are many big companies in Shanghai. It develops very fast. Tall buildings are the symbol of Shanghai. It has long history, but it is also an international city. Many foreigners visit to Shanghai. In 2021, the World Expo was successfully held in Shanghai.

As the Shanghai World Expo is around the corner,as a high

student,something should done to leave a good impression on the visitors from the work with our efforts.To meet the theme,namely Better city,better life,we may not be able to be one of the volunteers.However,there exist something we can do.First of all,we can do from our around environment,like planting trees in the campus,picking up rubbish in the public places.Secondly,we can follow the low-carbon idea,namely saving every kilowatt-hour of electricity,saving every drop of water and so on.In fact,the Expo held in Shanghai is a good symbol,as the host in the future,we should not only study hard but also learn to be a high-quality person.希望能帮上你。

人们常说“书籍是人类进步的阶梯”，我也这样认为。书确实给了我不少的益处。想想那些有书陪伴的日子，我学得自己真是一个幸福的孩子。

书籍，还记得我们一起走过的日子吗？虽不是大起大落，却也刻骨铭心；虽不是天长地长，却也回味无穷。和你在一起，让我领略到了范仲淹那“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”的抱负；李白那“天生我材必有用，千金散尽还复来”的自信。还让我知道了高尔基的天才出于勤奋的经典名言警句。

书籍，我已和你走过多少个日日夜夜，是你让我感受到了知识的广博，我在你身上一点点地汲取着知识。

As the Shanghai World Expo is around the corner,as a high

student,something should done to leave a good impression on the visitors from the work with our efforts.

To meet the theme,namely Better city,better life,we may not be able to be one of the volunteers.However,there exist something we can do.First of all,we can do from our around environment,like planting trees in the campus,picking up rubbish in the public places.Secondly,we can follow the low-carbon

idea,namely saving every kilowatt-hour of electricity,saving every drop of water and so on.

In fact,the Expo held in Shanghai is a good symbol,as the host in the future,we should not only study hard but also learn to be a high-quality person.

希望能帮上你！

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