外研版英语八年级下册单元话题作文满分范文必背(第三单元Module3)

单元话题满分范文必背

1． 某英文杂志正在进行My space hero的征文活动，假如你是该杂志的热心读者，你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。请你根据下面有关景海鹏的资料写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，参加征文活动(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 1. 1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时； 2. 2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务； 3. 2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；

4. 2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。 My space hero

My space hero is Jing Haipeng. _______________________________________ 【答案】My space hero

My space hero is Jing Haipeng. Jing was born in Yuncheng, Shanxi in 1966. Jing has done many exciting things. He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours. He has been to space three times. In September 2008, he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming. In June 2012 he took the Shenzhou-9 spaceship into space with Liu Wang and Liu Yang. On 17th October 2016, Jing took the Shenzhou-11 spaceship into space for the third time. He and Chen Dong stayed in space for thirty-three days. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下我的太空英雄。所提供的材料中列举了你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。根据所给的景海鹏的资料，主要从1. 1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时；2. 2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务；3. 2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；4. 2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。这四个方面去介绍。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】

He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours. 他已安全地在空中飞行了1200

多小时。more than=over超过。本句话的语感较好。 【高分句型二】

In September 2008, he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming. 2008年9月，他和翟志刚、刘伯明一起将神舟7号宇宙飞船送入太空。 句子In September 2008在句子中做时间状语。

2．假如你是一名宇航员，你曾乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空，请描述一下你的经历及感受。词数在80左右。

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I am an astronaut. I have ever been to space once. I went there by spacecraft. I went around the earth several times. I saw the earth, the sun and many other stars through the window of the spacecraft. They were very beautiful. I also walked in space. When I walked I felt as if I was flying. What an unforgettable experience!

The space is very beautiful. I hope I can go into space again. I also hope to go to the moon one day. 【解析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己作为一名宇航员乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空的经历和感受。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自己乘坐宇宙飞船遨游太空的经历和感受，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

3．假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。

请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。

An Exciting Trip

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An Exciting Trip

Today is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago. We went to the Mars by spaceship. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found a lot of things different from our earth, such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing.

After that, we had a party. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.

Finally, we made phone calls with aliens. We all have a good time on Mars.

The trip was very interesting and I will never forget the trip. I hope to travel to the Mars again soon. 【解析】 【分析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。要求以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅；内容包括在火星上举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话，以及你的所见所闻等；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

4．最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：是否应该太空探险？请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

一些同学赞同 获得新的知识 从太空取得新资源 扩大人类的生存空间 一些同学反对 耗资巨大 宇航员的安全问题 …… 你自己的观点 …… Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.

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Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?

We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.

Some of us thought it was important to research the outer space because, first of all, people could get a better understanding of the outer space. Second, we could find new resources for humans to use. Third, these explorations could possibly enlarge new living space for human beings.

However, others thought very differently. They said this kind of exploration cost too much money. Besides, it was very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.

In my opinion, people should research the outer space and such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out. 【解析】 【详解】

1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“是否应该太空探险”为主题，根据表格提示，介绍讨

论的情况并表达你自己的观点，必要时可进行适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主来叙述，写作时承接开头，要写出同学们赞同或反对的理由，清楚地表明自己的看法，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。

5．假如你是玛丽，现在是2104年，你生活在火星上，你的朋友吉姆生活在地球上，不久他也将来火星生活。请根据以下表格提示，写一封email告诉他你在火星上的生活情况。要求80词左右，文中不得出现真实人名。 总体感觉 学习方面 生活方面 环境方面 生活设施

【答案】Dear Jim，

Now, I'm writing to you on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars. I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and fresh flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighborhood. They make our life more convenient.

Hope to see you soon. Good luck!

Yours, Mary

【解析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要注意电子邮件格式，开头先顶格写问候；正文开始要注意段首空两格；最后不要忘记了祝愿和落款，落款写在邮件右下角。 2.例文点评：例文采用两段式；用第一人称来叙述作者在火星的生活和感受；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作顺序是按照表格内容记叙，从总体感觉到学习到生活到再到环境最后到生活设施，让文章显得重点突出，条理清晰；最后结尾和收件人互动，增加读者

比地球生活更舒适、更有趣 没有学校，通过电脑在网上学校学习 有机器人帮助做大部分家务，有更多闲暇时间 环境优美，处处是绿树鲜花，没有污染 住宅附近有大型的超市，生活很方便 代入感。 3.高分亮点：

短语：instead of；make sth. convenient；so that。

句型：It’s + adj. + to do sth.；so that引导的结果状语从句。 【点睛】

书面表达是英语考试中占分比比较大的一个题目，同学们在做题时可以按照“审（审题，审人称、时态，审要点）——列（列单词、词组）——连（连词成句，连句成篇）—— 查（全文检查）”的步骤写作，避免考试中漏点，行文逻辑混乱，低级错误频出的现象。

6．假如现在是2025年，学校组织了一次去火星的旅行，在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人通电话，总之，你们玩得很高兴。

要求：(1)以第一人称来描述。(2)词数：60词左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 提示：alien(外星人)

One day in 2025, we went to the Mars by spaceship

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One day in 2025, we went to the Mars by spaceship to take a trip. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found the Mars was very beautiful. We also had a party on it. We sang and danced happily. We enjoyed ourselves very much. On Mars, we even made a telephone to an alien. He welcomed us to the Mars. He hoped to go to the earth and play with us.

Our trip to the Mars was very interesting and exciting. I will never forget the trip. 【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读： 本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的提示要点，描述自己去火星旅行的经历。2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称，时态采用一般过去时。分为两段式：第一段介绍去火星的旅行经历，第二段评价这段旅行。写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。